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    dots Submission Name: Maverick,dots
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    Author: Swanne
    Elite Ratio:    4.31 - 258/206/43
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 199
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1060



    Description:
       Maverick,
    we've made this bed
    we've lied in it
    we'll die in it


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    dotsMaverick,dots
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    Maverick,
    Again and again,
    It’s so strong --
    Salty
    This texture--
    Taste of regret
    Tonight,
    We came alive
    Again
    I call you
    Maverick,
    They name us
    Lairs
    Let’s start
    over
    Turn me
    Over
    and over
    Again

    Maverick,
    On and on,
    Is that your heart Beating --
    Bursting
    This pounding --
    Pulsing inside
    For now,
    We are living
    Again
    We are crashing
    Maverick,
    They labeled us
    Addicts
    Let’s quit
    Another
    Stop each
    Other
    Is it over?
    Again

    Maverick,
    More and more,
    It’s so awful --
    Amazing
    This transgression --
    Temptation
    This instant
    Is life
    Again
    You are murmuring.
    Maverick,
    They pegged us
    Tricksters
    Let’s play
    Yet again
    Fools for
    Each other
    All over
    Again




    Submitted on 2006-09-16 18:52:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This was pretty neat. I liked the flow of this very much. You seem to be saying of this person that you are in this relationship come hell or high water and there is no backing out, regardless of what people say. I didn't get passion, as much as I got the feeling of love and devotion. Or additction rather. I loved your style of writing this. There is nothing I can see that need changing.

    Catrina
    | Posted on 2006-09-17 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]



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