OKay, so here's my belated comment. And it'll have to be short, until I find more time. Heck I'm not even supposed to be on right now. =]] But.. basically, of the three new ones, this was my favorite. Short, to the point, and sweet. Well, not so sweet.
I guess I'm a melancholy poem kind of person. I really am.
And 'neath the stars A whim of fate Shall guide the marred Til kindness breaks
Very possibly better [in my eyes, at least] than anything else I've seen you write. It's just so.. unaltered, it seems. Maybe because this is only a part of a longer poem, perhaps? I don't know. But it just really rings a bell with me.
Submission Name: Kindness Breaks
