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    dots Submission Name: Being Medots
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    Author: ThisIsReal
    ASL Info:    25-M-/Found
    Elite Ratio:    4.27 - 182/194/89
    Words: 207
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 600
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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       Just a poem about being in love and not being able to do a damn thing bout it, therfore going for broke


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    dotsBeing Medots
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    I am always waging war
    within myself and out
    The majority of my friends
    don't know what it's about
    but I do

    It's not for the art of conflict
    Just because of my heart's affliction
    The war I wage now
    is for my soul's addiction

    There is a fight within me
    part wanting to let go
    but when the idea comes up
    my soul screams "HELL NO!"

    It isn't uncommon
    to war within
    but when it goes external
    the real fight begins

    She wants me to move on
    but yet part holds to me
    I am continuously drawn to her
    as she tries to set me free

    Crazy ideas
    and endless schemes
    I need to move on
    but she's in my dreams

    I can't move past
    I wouldn't if I could
    I keep going headstrong
    though she thinks I should

    I cannot give up
    love is worth so much more
    continuing the fight
    to see what's instore

    It's not the art of conflict
    just because of my heart's affliction
    The war I wage now
    is for my soul's addiction

    I may be slipping off
    on the verge of insanity
    but let me tell ya'll
    I'm just being me




    Submitted on 2006-09-17 00:36:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      It's weird how we are stuck most on the people who want us least, isn't it? It seems like that, at least.... I know what this is saying, it's like there is a whole world out there and people think you just don't realize it, and the saddest truth is that you DO realize it, and all you want is what/who is familiar, which is usually the person who wants you the least... But remember, they usually don't want you until you're not wanting them, then it reverses... know what I'm saying? Anyway, good luck with this, and you wrote it well... you said exactly how it feels.
    | Posted on 2006-09-17 00:00:00 | by grey_girl | [ Reply to This ]


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