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    dots Submission Name: Jealousydots
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    Author: Poetic
    ASL Info:    21/Female/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    7.94 - 78/39/19
    Words: 295
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 153
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    Bytes: 2071



    Description:
       I do not know who wrote this, one of my friends posted it in a bulletin on myspace... i just thought it was sad... but a really great write, and wanted to share it with everyone on here :-)


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    dotsJealousydots
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    boy and a girl,
    the best of friends.
    From elementary to high school
    from
    beginning to end.

    Through all those years
    their friendship grew.

    They both felt the same,
    but neither knew.
    Each waking moment
    since the
    day they met.
    They both loved each other
    sunrise to sunset.

    He was all she had
    in her terrible life.
    He was the one
    who kept her from her knife.
    She was his angel,
    she made him smile.
    Though life threw him curves,
    she made it all worth while.

    Then one day
    things went terribly wrong.
    The next few weeks
    were like a very sad
    song.

    He made her jealous
    on purpose he tried.
    When the girl asked, "Do you love her?"
    on purpose he lied.


    He played with jealousy
    like it was a game.
    Little did he know
    Things would never be the same.
    His plan was working
    but he had no clue.
    How wrong things would go,
    the damage he would do.

    One night she broke down,
    feeling very
    alone.
    Just her and the blade,
    no one else home.

    She dialed his number,
    he answered, "Hello"
    She told him she loved him
    and hung up the phone.

    He raced to her
    house
    just a minute too late.
    Found her lying in blood,
    her heart
    had no rate.

    Beside her was a note,
    in it her confession.
    Her love for this boy,
    her only obsession.

    As he read the note,
    he knelt down and cried.
    Grabbed her knife,
    that night they both died.

    She was found in his arms,
    both of them dead.
    Under her
    note
    his handwriting said:

    "I loved her
    so, she never knew.
    All this time
    I loved her
    too."




    Submitted on 2006-09-17 03:06:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      omg thats horrendously sad! poor babies, i always think that if you're in love then stop being a pussy and make it obvious, at least if the other person doesn't love you then you can accept it and move on...
    Good find!
    | Posted on 2006-11-23 00:00:00 | by Tali | [ Reply to This ]
      I've seen this all over the internet, don't tell me you're gonna try to take credit for writing it.
    | Posted on 2006-09-17 00:00:00 | by freshcookies | [ Reply to This ]



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