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` Love of the unrequited type... Ah! How paradoxical it be! Even more paradoxical Than that of the returned type... return to me my boomerang if ironic paradox be bring on your wings an offering return to set this captive free Love is love whether returned or not. It gives all meaning to life, But when not returned It drives us into insanity! Constantly contemplating Upon what may or may not be... provide a reason, supply a rhyme keep despair exiled forever to hearts a breathe of gentle clime elixir to heart's endeavour If you have not experienced This type of love, This unrequited love Then you shall not understand The joyous part. You will think it all tragic. But there is a joyous part! you freely give from joyous grace once prisoner of love withheld escape on wings of kiss' embrace receive twin souls, tender fire meld Love is love whether returned or not. my need reaches to the heavens despaired reply from there to find where is that spark this chest quickens love without truth is love unkind Whether that person feels the same or not, I still love her, and to have someone That I love so much, Brings certain joy unto me... But certain grief to not recieve the love in return... It is the most tragic grief And the most joyous joy At the same time! Love, paradox of paradoxes! ` |
It is the most tragic grief And the most joyous joy At the same time! Great collaboration. Hope to see more some time. | Posted on 2006-10-09 00:00:00 | by arkayye | [ Reply to This ] | Very good! I loved eveything except the last line, it did not work for me. I loved how ou told of the joy in just loving even if it is not returned to you. That is one of the wisest things to know in life. I loved the rhyme scheme and the flow. I loved your wording as well. Almost Old English. Nice work! | Catrina | Posted on 2006-09-19 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ] | |