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    dots Submission Name: How Could U Do This To Me?dots
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    Author: DBE
    ASL Info:    16 - Male - UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 30/31/24
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 151
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 764



    Description:
       hopefully this is the final poem im writing for her - now its time to erase her from my heart and mind.

    plz leave ur thoughts as this is the most powerful one ive written (imo). Thx


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    dotsHow Could U Do This To Me?dots
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    How Could U Do This To Me?
    Do U Know What You’ve Done?
    Now, I Can’t Breathe 2 Seconds Without U,
    No, Not Even 1.

    How Could U Do This to Me?
    U Put Me Under a Spell,
    Now, Every Moment Without U,
    Is Like a Lifetime in Hell.

    How Could U Do This to Me?
    This Never-Ending Curse,
    Now, When I’m Not Near U,
    The Pain Only Gets Worse.

    How Could U Do This to Me?
    Every Moment Tastes Like Salt,
    Now, My Heart Was Stolen,
    And It’s Not My Fault.

    How Could U Do This to Me?
    Have I Really Sinned?
    I Fell In Love With U,
    Now I’m Twisting In The Wind.
    Every Moment Without You
    Is Like A Lifetime In Hell




    Submitted on 2006-09-17 05:17:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Bravo! I felt the pain and I know how you feel I had a girl do the same thing to me she basically [censored]ed up my life.

    ~lost~
    | Posted on 2006-09-18 00:00:00 | by Forver_lost | [ Reply to This ]
      wow...you can really feel the pain and sorrow as you read this poem. it makes you think. good job!
    | Posted on 2006-09-18 00:00:00 | by EmeRalDEyeZ5491 | [ Reply to This ]



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