Umbra. Something vaguely related to shadow I think. So I like the title.
I also love this stanza alot :
Vengance grew inside this soil
You cannot condemn this dream
Bleak of mind, your sky uncoil
Trap your heart inside your scream
To me it's just a pure expression of absolute fear, very dark, very wonderful, and the entire piece just speaks to me about fearing death.
I'm not too sure what unknown soldier said, I don't sense a blind person anywhereabouts..
How do you as blind of eye Find a wraith beside her thorns
those were my favorite lines because of the irony of a blind person being able to find the good things in life. which i think the wraith represents. this seems like the flow would kinda be like a chant that u could tell to little kids at a bonfire. cool stuff.