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    dots Submission Name: The Message (a song)dots
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    Author: The Gadfly
    ASL Info:    52/M/Moreno Valley, CA
    Elite Ratio:    3.55 - 1048/1348/375
    Words: 197
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 1124
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1305



    Description:
       wriiten by Don Maresh and Greg Doyle
    copyright 2006
    Don and Greg Praise Music


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    dotsThe Message (a song)dots
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    As He was standing upon a hillside,
    a crowd had gathered 'round that hill,
    and with great passion He brought the message,
    because He served His Father's will.

    He came to talk about His Father,
    abiding hope, enduring love.
    And when He walked, they longed to follow,
    because the best was yet to come.

    As He was sitting among His brothers,
    He stood, then humbly washed their feet.
    When He broke bread, He shared the message,
    "Remember me, whene'er you meet."

    He came to share His Father's promise,
    abiding hope, enduring love.
    And when He left, they longed to follow,
    because the best was yet to come.

    As He was hanging for our transgressions,
    as He was dying to pay sin's cost,
    in love eternal, He left the message.
    He left it there upon that cross.

    He came to save all of God's children.
    He gave us life when He was done.
    And where He's gone we long to follow,
    because His best is yet to come.

    Because His best is yet to come,
    (that is the message)
    Because His best is yet to come.




    The Gadfly




    Submitted on 2006-09-17 15:01:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      It's a good overall effort as far as generic gospel goes this would be one of the better ones, I'm sorry I don't wish to be mean, but to much "Christian" music say the exact same things over and over, and after a while it has no effect on me, I'm a struggling agnostic who loves a great religious song that inspires me and gives me hope,
    I didn't feel it with this one sorry....but within the Christian community I'm sure this would be a great song good luck with it...

    thank you, stan
    | Posted on 2006-09-18 00:00:00 | by StanKross | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, this was good. I'm not one who listen to religious songs, I know I'm a heathen, lol, but this was very good. It did not seem to preachy. You spoke the truth and you did it well. I loved the wording and the flow. This was a lovely reminder of the gif he gave and his message, plus to endure because he has more gifts for us. Very tasteful and well said Greg.

    Catrina
    | Posted on 2006-09-17 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      Bravo Greg & Don well said ,it really went to the heart of me, for it spoke truth and was simply said, it leaves a very good feeling. I think this is a wonderful song and will be sang by many in the furture, I'm going to add it to my faves, thanks for the wonderful write you guys have shared with all of here at es
    adnil
    | Posted on 2006-09-17 00:00:00 | by adnil | [ Reply to This ]


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