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    Author: Cherub Winter
    ASL Info:    21/m/IL
    Elite Ratio:    3.31 - 17/20/11
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 975
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       this is an old one, but when i found it, i thought of you pix teehee.


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    My god, what have I done?
    Call for me beautiful lady, I will be gone
    But I will carry your words, I'll sing your song
    To warm me through frozen times, may they be long
    I'm blind to your face, still I can read your smile
    Your words give you shape, to let my imagination run wild
    On the long road ahead, the poems that go unread
    Will be waiting for me there, and my praises be not unsaid
    As a man of melodies, my lyrics I will save
    I will pave my avenue while standing tall and brave
    Although words are little, they will get me through
    Because ideas are enormous
    For those I thank you




    Submitted on 2006-09-17 16:27:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Its really great. I'm actually touched that it would remind you of me,trust me,when ever you mention me its like I feel closer to your cirle of friends...

    "I'm blind to your face, still I can read your smile
    Your words give you shape, to let my imagination run wild"

    I love this part,how you say it and the truth behind it... Beauty is but an image one's mind imagines to compare to just another image,I'm not really a fan of what's on the outside but rather what's on the inside. Its all the tiny things put together that make up the big things in life,You and I are just bits to the puzzle. And so far you're making a huge impact on the final image...

    This script is truly worth reading twice. (not to proof read it but appreciate.)

    Oh,and as for adding (Just read it) as one of your favourites,another touching moment. THNX!

    Pix.
    | Posted on 2006-09-18 00:00:00 | by pixie_007 | [ Reply to This ]


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