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    dots Submission Name: My Wedding Vowsdots
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    Author: WorththeWait
    ASL Info:    23/Female/Wyoming
    Elite Ratio:    4.73 - 753/407/43
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 106
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 904



    Description:
       I wrote this for my husband just before our wedding... we didn't use it in the ceremony, bcs we had a Catholic ceremony and it just didnt fit, but I'm having it framed for our new house we just bought!


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    dotsMy Wedding Vowsdots
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    The orchestra of life
    rehearsed throughout my childhood.
    Our meeting, the maestro's baton upon the stand.

    Your steadfast perserverance,
    the cello's courtship song,
    the flutes our first shy conversations sighed.

    My careful dance of love and fear
    the harpist's range explored,
    and strings together yielded ramparts high.

    The darkest storms of sorrow's night
    the timpani's thunder rolled,
    yet glory's trumpeteers announced the dawn!

    Your triumphs and my failings,
    Your weaknesses, my strengths,
    together sing the bridge between our souls.

    In sorrow and in joy,
    In health and in sickness,
    In youth and through old age,
    For my partner and my friend,
    And forsaking all others,
    I choose you.




    Submitted on 2006-09-17 18:04:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love this...The relationship between the events and the instruments was unique and well done, love can sometimes seem to produce a melody between two people, I'm glad you found yours, as far as a critique, 4th verse 2nd line...Is that supposed to be thunder...I cant find anything else...great stuff

    btw congratulations

    thanx, stan
    | Posted on 2006-09-17 00:00:00 | by StanKross | [ Reply to This ]



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