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    Author: SinCeer05
    ASL Info:    21mVA
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 243/279/168
    Words: 297
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 1152
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    Bytes: 1881



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       This topic was stumbled upon while thinking back in the day, back to when i worked for a company called Lifetime. Lifetime is not as bad as i describe in this post. it is actually one of the better corporations. but im sure a lot of people can relate to this topic. Its just an opinion, leave me some feedback..


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    I plot on those who victimize-an-shun
    average joes makin bread wit no vision or eyes-of-the-sun
    corporations are killin the weak with centralized-funds,
    so I’m forced to criticize an tantalize CEO’s with guns
    expose the workings of a ‘mind-state’ of those at the top
    profits an margins for bigger houses an they will never stop
    not until I sever-there-lots, an demand the world to be more clever-on-the-clock
    im telling you the cowardly got you workin hourly an it will never-stop

    assembly lines an factory closings,
    there tempting the blind wit wages of unsatisfactory withholdings,
    just listen to me vent with enlightenment for a life sublime
    instead of being in a class like a category of misery an loathing
    to an extent the torment of society being frightened is the sign

    Companies are killing for money so cash-is-blood,
    backstabbing employees rise against you quicker then flash-floods
    I rather work on a farm an bask-in-mud
    then fall helpless to the cycle listening to a dude wearing a mask while pretending to hug,
    he is a fake bitch, just after the cake like a snitch
    so easily the tides turn to switch
    promotions for your devotion but you just their bitch,
    you might have the solution for the biggest glitch
    so you fix an enhance profits for them one more time
    that’s one way never to get rich becuz they will ask you to do one thousand more times
    those stuck in project housing need to realign there spines
    stand tall an demand it all,
    live for the equality an chance of not being damned shopping at ghetto malls
    NO corporation or company is larger then a peaceful life
    Murder is a crime and CEOs are the grim Reapers wife




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      this made me think about the whole Enron thing and about how many people got [censored]ed over. this was an ok write. your last line was good and there were some other good ones but it lacked ur usual flare. it's hard finding something to write about lately huh?
    | Posted on 2006-11-02 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      hi, this was cool i cant realy relate to this, but have def given me an insite to what goes on, bet u glad ur out of it now huh?
    keep em cummin
    kyrenia x
    | Posted on 2006-09-18 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]
      This has a distinct urban feel, which I like when listening, but read, something gets lost for me, the content is awesome though, I love these types of writes they get me thinking, we live in a world so completely consumed with greed, I think most people can relate to that theme in some way or another, Intelligent, honest....good stuff

    thax, stan

    p.s. I have a few similar themed poem's check 'em out if you want
    | Posted on 2006-09-18 00:00:00 | by StanKross | [ Reply to This ]


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