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Roses Of December Fall

Author: Jingles
ASL Info:    19.m.canada
Elite Ratio:    2.08 - 18 /60 /36
Words: 151
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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I just want opinions.I know It's not my best work ever but It's what I was feeling tonight.

Roses Of December Fall

Puddles of crimson,Veins of silk
Lips of deciet,Heart full of guilt
Holding her back,Weighing her down
Life I now shattered,Will never be found
Green eyes full of pain,Pain that I've caused
I should have cut deeper,Before our paths crossed
She can still be saved,From the darkness inside
The creation of anguish,I've been trying to hide
Now's my chance to save her,Save her from me
Save her from the nightmare,I let my first love see
This thin metal blade,I press into my wrist
It's been such a long time,And is constantly missed
The blood bubbles up,And cascades to the ground
The ground my casket,Should be resting under now
Yet again my mind ,Slips into the frost
I close my eyes tightly,As more blood is lost
I did it for you,I saved you from me
The whispers were right,This burden is free
Time goes on,You'll love again
As these Roses Of December fall

Submitted on 2006-09-18 04:46:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I decided to look into more of your work and I'm glad I did. It's so beautiful. The imagery is vivid and the way you've written the words is so different.
Reading your poetry makes me feel as though I have found an oasis in a dying wasteland.
The Conqueror
| Posted on 2006-10-27 00:00:00 | by The Conqueror | [ Reply to This ]

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