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    dots Submission Name: Holiday 2 Lovedots
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    Author: DBE
    ASL Info:    16 - Male - UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 30/31/24
    Words: 219
    Class/Type: Story/Love
    Total Views: 151
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1156



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       wrote this while i was feeling down. what do u think?


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    dotsHoliday 2 Lovedots
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    I wanted to take a break from my hectic lifestyle, so i went to the local travel agents to see where i could go. most places had been rated 4/5 stars, but one place stood out it was rated at 7 stars. i thought to myself "wow, this place must be special if it breaks the 5 star barrier". i read more about it, but the last thing i read was the name of the place. It was called Love. "What a weird name" i muttered under my breath, but i booked the holiday anyway. a week later, there i was, on the sandy beaches of Love watchin the ocean washing away thoughts of home, feeling the cool breeze on my skin.

    for the first few days it was amazing, then as i relaxed my mind, i began to notice all the little faults. the constant thoughts whirling around in my head, not letting me relax. the sleepless nights and most of all, the neverending heartache. i came back 2 days earlier than planned an returned to the travel agents. the place called Love was still rated at 7 stars. then it hit me. i hated myself for not noticing it earlier. how could i have possibly not realised it? I should have known: Love Really Is Overrated.




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      As i read it i thought it was gonna be some gooey mush love crap but i laughed when i read the end cuz its true and u put it in the siplest sense
    | Posted on 2006-09-18 00:00:00 | by allyjt | [ Reply to This ]



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