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    dots Submission Name: Heartbreaking Phantom.dots
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    Author: YC013
    ASL Info:    21/F/TN
    Elite Ratio:    1.38 - 16/12/19
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 833
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    Bytes: 206



    Description:
       I had to write this in for my AP English class and it is about this guy who I really liked.


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    dotsHeartbreaking Phantom.dots
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    Heartbreaking phantom, how I do miss you.
    Thoughts of you in-prison my heart from moving on.
    My heart sings no more for we have part.
    How can I let go of the phantom who holds my heart.




    Submitted on 2006-09-18 16:02:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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