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    dots Submission Name: This Woman.dots

    Author: YC013
    ASL Info:    21/F/TN
    Elite Ratio:    1.38 - 16/12/19
    Words: 201
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
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    dotsThis Woman.dots

    This woman, she is very beautiful.
    In anything she wears, she looks wonderful.
    Skin so soft, what a natural beauty.
    Her looks mask her to look like a sweetie.
    Fair and moderate length with silky hair,
    She has an imperfection she must bare.
    She is paid extremely well for her flaw.
    Too well known around town to feel aw.
    The others envy this pretty lady.
    Married or single, they think she is shady.
    Not once before has she had a true boy.
    Because of that, she now treats them like toys.
    She takes part in many infidelities.
    Confuses people's sexuality.
    Lusting men know where to find her corner.
    Just by the sight of her, they get boners.
    Her body screams sex but her heart does not.
    Though her body can be bought, her heart cannot.
    Her heart is confined away in distress.
    Her heart's desire seeks to not be surpressed.
    On this journey, she hopes to find meaning.
    To change her life from lust intervening.
    Away from the town who called her a whore.
    No more will she have that flaw that she bore.
    She dreams of find a loving, good man.
    Who will protect her from all that is damned.

    Submitted on 2006-09-18 16:42:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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