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Sunset


Author: Black-Death
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Sunset



As the sunsets i hold you in my arms ..... as you hold me back. as i look into your etes. you gaze back. i hold you tighter... closer.. i move my head towards you.. i smell your sweet sent on your skin.. i press my lips aginst yours... i wake up crying...




Submitted on 2006-09-18 17:29:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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