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as i sit here...


Author: Black-Death
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Class/Type: Misc /Angst
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as i sit here...



As i sit here thinking... wising a way out... to take my heart out... stop loveing.. as i fall for you... as i love you... i start to love some one elce. the love i gave to you was wrong... it was sompthing i shoulnt of let out ...




Submitted on 2006-09-18 17:36:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  It's like something that would be written on the last page of a journal...

| Posted on 2006-10-04 00:00:00 | by Nihilist Weasel | [ Reply to This ]


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