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    dots Submission Name: Randomdots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
    Total Views: 1023
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       To feed the masses with but 7 loaves of bread and a few fishes...I'm staying focused in the positive and as the Lord is my guide I will not be detered or disheartened for all may, at times, seem bleak in Hope & Faith is All the possibility needed.

    I posted my Love 1 Another draft letter and received 1 comment but it was the most motivating comment & it's what I have been hearing on a daily basis ~ this only serves me to try harder. I visited 20 churches and gave them a copy of the letter and slowly but surely I'm getting some donations of necessary items which will help with the Mission.

    So, whatever your dream or your promise of Love, Peace, & Joy, never let anyone or anything turn you from that which causes your soul 2 shine.

    Happy Sonday 2 All!!

    Love, Peace, Joy!!!

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.


    Renew the day 2 Love, Faith & Compassion...as the Son rises, spreading ITs light across the horizon... stretching up 2 tHis day, embracing all, enveloped in divine grace for all blindly seen is faith's home in 1.
    Drinketh from this cup of Creation...what warmth here 2 B found and to share the bread of Life, truth uplifted in another.

    Submitted on 2004-05-23 11:40:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, I am totally turned off by the negitve comments I keep coming across, comments that don't really have anything to do with the poetry itself. If we don't watch ourselves, we could turn the beauty that was created here into something really ugly. withoutmyths should be ashamed, that was a ridiculous comment.
    | Posted on 2004-05-24 00:00:00 | by Casper | [ Reply to This ]
      A very uplifting message. I hope your 'mission' as you call it, has a lot more success! Just keep at it and believe in yourself! But I'm sure you already do!
    Have a great day!
    | Posted on 2004-05-23 00:00:00 | by JimweiZERO | [ Reply to This ]
      very beautiful. i got the upliftment. my sister would really appreciate this poem so i'm gonna send it to her. she's been a devout Christian for about 12 years. maybe she could give a much better comment than I.
    | Posted on 2004-05-23 00:00:00 | by pioneerheart | [ Reply to This ]

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