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    dots Submission Name: Under the dark currents of despair (I)dots
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    Author: Twisted
    Elite Ratio:    7.47 - 159/57/75
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       If you can guess the meaning of this,Fallen, Wine Tears, or Angel of Death's Final Intimacy correctly...I shall comment on ten of your works!


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    dotsUnder the dark currents of despair (I)dots
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    Desperate whispers, soft cries fill they remaining silence,
    It echoes hollowly as I rise to the surface with a pained gasp,
    Under the dark currents of despair,
    I fall to rise,
    And rise to fall,
    Back again…

    Under desperate cries, and soft whispers,
    I wait to be judged by those with cold eyes,
    And refuse sympathy from those weak of heart.
    Under the dark currents of despair,
    I fall to rise,
    And rise to fall,
    Back again…

    Above desperate eyes, and soft hearts,
    I look away and test my wings to fall again,
    Losing my innocence along the way to hell,
    Under the dark currents of despair,
    I fall to rise,
    And rise to fall,
    Back again….

    Causing the desperate pleads, and the hungry embrace,
    I feel helpless as I scramble to take what’s mine before it’s gone,
    Sucking the souls of the living to survive,
    Under the dark currents of despair,
    I fall to rise,
    And rise to fall,
    Back again…




    Submitted on 2006-09-18 19:58:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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