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So close yet so far apart This love just wrecks my heart Your here at the worst of times So where are you during the best years of my life Miles away into the deep cold unknown Way up North were nobody goes Is a place you call home Just an opinon even more so an inner thought Stay here with me we could rock! But I guess it's up to you what you want to do I have to stop mothering you Not like it's a bad thing But it's not so good When I see your face so blue And your world fall apart But what can I do other then be the fool Who always has your back for you Being mad I could never do Until you pull a stupid stunt and fly the coop But what more should I do Sit around and wait for you Til yoou finally figure out what to do I just want you to see this from my point of veiw Being younger out of us two Just realize what you put me through Before you finally decide what to do! |
So what did your brother think of the poem you wrote for him? Hope he liked it like we do! | Posted on 2006-09-19 00:00:00 | by psycho_1 | [ Reply to This ] | I like how you are able to have the abitlity to write something like this to show that other people and yourself as well need to let are brothers and sisters know that we love them and how much they really mean to us | thanx poet09 | Posted on 2006-09-19 00:00:00 | by poet09 | [ Reply to This ] | Hi .. I too have a sister that lives far from me... I miss her so.... Your poem helped me to figure out what to write about next.... I will start a poem about my sister, my best friend... I liked reading yours.. and I could feel the pain of missing her that you feel... I liked the bit of rhyme in it... Thank you for sharing with us... Desi.. | | Posted on 2006-09-19 00:00:00 | by Desi | [ Reply to This ] | |