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    dots Submission Name: Jordondots
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    Author: FailureXX
    ASL Info:    15/f/MI
    Elite Ratio:    1.91 - 7/19/10
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 175
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 646



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    dotsJordondots
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    Hello again, you withered soul.
    I cannot help to make you whole.
    Reverse my words, back to me.
    I myself, I'll need to see.
    Wave your hand, in my direction.
    We'll sneak away, from this deception.
    Don't leave me standing without a word,
    You're the newest fad, hav-ent you heard?
    Rest your head upond my shoudler,
    We'll let this hell begin to smoulder.


    Hello again, you withered soul.
    I cannot help to make you whole.
    My heart will stop, I'll skip some beats.
    If you'll hold my hand and lay with me.




    Submitted on 2006-09-19 13:42:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Neat and nifty stuff here, much like a lyric ... it does, indeed, have some very good rhyme and even better meter. I liked it muchly ... three big bravos: bravo ... bravo ... bravo ... michael
    | Posted on 2007-04-06 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      It's perfect. that's really all there is to say about it. it's a great love poem and it's really touching.
    thanks for sharing... keep up the good work.
    ali
    | Posted on 2006-11-03 00:00:00 | by Ali Marie | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, emotional. I love how the first 2 lines repeat at the end! Very very nice to read ^_^

    =Ayane=
    | Posted on 2006-09-22 00:00:00 | by Ayane | [ Reply to This ]
      Love it. Emotional. Beautiful. Keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2006-09-21 00:00:00 | by LovelyGoddess | [ Reply to This ]
      I really don't know what to say.
    "Sniff"
    "Sniff"


    Valle_Siddious
    | Posted on 2006-09-19 00:00:00 | by Valle_Siddious | [ Reply to This ]



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