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Thinking of him


Author: Poeticprincess
ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333 /325 /104
Words: 100
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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a poem inspired by Robert


Thinking of him



Thinking about him
Is sort of like this
Remember the look in his eyes
The first time we kissed
The passion I felt
Almost to much to write
But that’s what I feel
As I think of him tonite
The way his skin feels
The way time stood still
It’s all good but
I fein for him too much
The way he looks at me
The way that he talks
The way that he smells
Even the way that he walks
So as I sit here
With my paper and pen
Remember today that
I always think of him




Submitted on 2006-09-19 16:52:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  hi , great write! , its got a nice flow and perfectly describes the feelings , how we love thinking of him, the question "is he thinking of me?" keep writing
| Posted on 2006-09-20 00:00:00 | by tammytompkins | [ Reply to This ]


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