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I've Tried

Author: juss_kriss
ASL Info:    23/F/Canada
Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 404 /445 /126
Words: 161
Class/Type: Lyrics /The pain inside
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I've Tried

verse 1:
i've tried to climb out of
this hole i've seemed to dig myself
the ground falls from beneath my feet
and everytime i touch the walls
they crumble at my fingertips

i've tried
to fix this life
i've tried
but nothing is right

i've cried
but no one seems to notice
and i've
screamed till my throat bled
i've tried
but it was all for nothing

verse 2:
i've ried to make it on
whatever i have that's left inside
but it isn't much look at me
i, i keep falling apart
i keep losing my train of thought

verse 3:
i've tried to run away
from ones who seem to tear me apart
they threw their chains around my wrists
and pulled me down to my knees
before pointing that gun at me

i've tried
but i can't make it
i've tried
but it's not right
i can't fight

Submitted on 2006-09-19 20:13:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Once again you show your songwriting skills with another strong write of lyrics
This one I really like
I think the strongest part of this song is the line

they threw their chains around my wrists
and pulled me down to my knees

That is some very clever wording as it fits perfectly with the rest of the write and creates and urgency

Excellent Job
God Bless

Iif you get a chance I recently put up some new writes
Can you Please check them out and let me know what you think
Thank You
| Posted on 2006-09-19 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]

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