verse 1:
i've tried to climb out of
this hole i've seemed to dig myself
the ground falls from beneath my feet
and everytime i touch the walls
they crumble at my fingertips
pre-chorus:
i've tried
to fix this life
i've tried
but nothing is right
chorus:
i've cried
but no one seems to notice
and i've
screamed till my throat bled
i've tried
but it was all for nothing
verse 2:
i've ried to make it on
whatever i have that's left inside
but it isn't much look at me
i, i keep falling apart
i keep losing my train of thought
verse 3:
i've tried to run away
from ones who seem to tear me apart
they threw their chains around my wrists
and pulled me down to my knees
before pointing that gun at me
coda:
i've tried
but i can't make it
i've tried
but it's not right
i can't fight
HI Once again you show your songwriting skills with another strong write of lyrics This one I really like I think the strongest part of this song is the line
they threw their chains around my wrists and pulled me down to my knees
That is some very clever wording as it fits perfectly with the rest of the write and creates and urgency
Excellent Job God Bless Ron
Iif you get a chance I recently put up some new writes Can you Please check them out and let me know what you think Thank You Ron
Submission Name: I've Tried
