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verse 1: i've tried to climb out of this hole i've seemed to dig myself the ground falls from beneath my feet and everytime i touch the walls they crumble at my fingertips pre-chorus: i've tried to fix this life i've tried but nothing is right chorus: i've cried but no one seems to notice and i've screamed till my throat bled i've tried but it was all for nothing verse 2: i've ried to make it on whatever i have that's left inside but it isn't much look at me i, i keep falling apart i keep losing my train of thought verse 3: i've tried to run away from ones who seem to tear me apart they threw their chains around my wrists and pulled me down to my knees before pointing that gun at me coda: i've tried but i can't make it i've tried but it's not right i can't fight |
HI Once again you show your songwriting skills with another strong write of lyrics This one I really like I think the strongest part of this song is the line they threw their chains around my wrists and pulled me down to my knees That is some very clever wording as it fits perfectly with the rest of the write and creates and urgency Excellent Job God Bless Ron Iif you get a chance I recently put up some new writes Can you Please check them out and let me know what you think Thank You Ron | Posted on 2006-09-19 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ] | |