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    dots Submission Name: Mad Planetdots
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    Author: Charles F Kane
    ASL Info:    34
    Elite Ratio:    1.43 - 4/17/14
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
    Total Views: 860
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 719



    Description:
       Madness has its own perspective


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    dotsMad Planetdots
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    Leaving the sanehouse
    and entering the mad world
    With my friends hands in my pockets
    and my trousers a bird.
    I'm wired, fired,
    hired and tired,
    shocked as a rock
    by the tick
    lacking its tock.
    And I have no clock
    to tell me the time,
    and I have no wallet
    to gimme a dime.

    My shoes are out walking
    forgot to pick up my feet
    My thoughts giving head
    to a plastic prick in my bed
    and the dog is walking the cat
    and the parrot packing the rat
    the hooker is packing the crook
    and slamming it into a book
    It's surely a mad planet yea
    completely out to sea




    Submitted on 2006-09-19 22:51:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      yo this is awsome. it was nice to read.
    | Posted on 2006-09-20 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]
      ooh. this is really good. absolutely enjoyable. true poetry.
    | Posted on 2006-09-19 00:00:00 | by LovelyGoddess | [ Reply to This ]


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