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    dots Submission Name: Divine X2Cdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 927
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 337



    Description:
       "Can crowd eternity into an hour,

    Or stretch an hour to eternity." Emerson



    Heaven is being the moment...Love, Peace, Joy!!!


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    dotsDivine X2Cdots
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    Glorious 1
    Creation
    Son of
    Light
    Crowned
    with rainbow
    Halo of
    Love
    Birdsong
    winds of
    wisdom
    Blow
    Lovingly blessed
    R We
    in
    2 Day
    Heavenly
    connection shadows
    Time &
    Place is
    soul of
    Flight




    Submitted on 2004-05-23 14:04:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Not bad. But the format is not really that great. You should do something about that...
    ...or not. It's your poem and maybe you feel this is the only way it should be presented...
    | Posted on 2004-05-23 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      I have to admit i had to read it like 4times to get it, and its either coz im slow or coz ther format makes it harder to read and im still a little confused. Im thinking this is like a religious/spiritual kinda thing.
    If you want you can explain it more to me and I will give a better comment. lol.
    | Posted on 2004-05-23 00:00:00 | by Exodus Night Sky | [ Reply to This ]
      oooh, very nice. i thought it was a little abstract and that's not usually my cup of tea, but this was very sweet and warm.
    | Posted on 2004-05-23 00:00:00 | by Voodoo_Lounge | [ Reply to This ]
      Why do you sometimes use '2' and stuff like that. I don't understand. Its a good job I use my mobile phone quite often. Lol. Anyway, its another great uplifting message! Love, Peace, Joy 2 U!
    | Posted on 2004-05-23 00:00:00 | by JimweiZERO | [ Reply to This ]


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