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    dots Submission Name: Sweet Musicdots

    Author: diamond_dave
    ASL Info:    33, m. belieze city
    Elite Ratio:    0.93 - 0/0/2
    Words: 194
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsSweet Musicdots

    I found my secrets in a wishing well
    But this I'll never tell
    I found my secrets in a wishing well
    But this I'll never tell

    I keep smelling sweet perfume
    But on this road I travel
    So I keep on looking on
    I just close my eyes and I dream

    Sweet music of yo'
    I just close my eyes, and dream
    Close my eyes, Close my eyes
    Sweet music, Sweet music of you

    Connecting the strings of the past
    So I've got this song
    and I must be, must be must be moving on

    Dreeeaming, Dreeeemin, Dreeeemin
    Dreamin of yo'

    I can't understand it, when feelings are so strong
    Love is a feelin' that must hold on
    I just close my eyes, I just close my eyes

    I'm Dreeeeeemin' sweet music of you
    Dreeeeeeam, Dreeemin' of yo' (haaaw)

    Kansas City, everything is pretty
    Im in Chicago, the feel (oh ray?)
    Travellin' to Tennesee (hokagin?) where I want to be
    Rome, Paris, Italy, France, Israel

    So I've got this song, and I must be, must be, must be
    moving on.

    Sweet music to you.

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