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    dots Submission Name: all we could dodots
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    Author: Ryou_Bakura
    ASL Info:    16/f/mi
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 35/43/13
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 137
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 470



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        Its a part of a poem chain about my first love. that I still love and loves me. looks for each post as it comes out and read the story of my first love.


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    dotsall we could dodots
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    Sneaking around the school,
    It was the only place we could go,
    Stealing money, from the bags in the locker room,
    Just for a pop and ending up with twenty more.
    Walking behind the bus garage trying not to get caught,
    And getting attacked by fire ants when trying to get to our look out,
    Sitting in the hidden spot,
    That ever one knew,
    We waited and talked in the silence
    Cause that was all that we could do.




    Submitted on 2006-09-20 20:29:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Know how that feels. A love trying to be kept secret but can't get away to be in just each other's company. It sucks big time. It's frustrating. How I hate love!
    Katana
    | Posted on 2006-10-24 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]



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