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    dots Submission Name: undeservingdots
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    Author: Ryou_Bakura
    ASL Info:    16/f/mi
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 35/43/13
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 151
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 385



    Description:
        Its a part of a poem chain about my first love. that I still love and loves me. looks for each post as it comes out and read the story of my first love.


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    dotsundeservingdots
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    Claming to be undeserving of my love,
    You looked away and tried to make things up another way,
    You thought and thought and nothing came
    Till I hugged you any way,
    You deserved my love,
    You never abused it,
    You cared for me and never hurt,
    You said the truth even if it hurt,
    You showed your love this way,
    Just by caring.




    Submitted on 2006-09-20 20:47:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      hi, another very good write. poe
    | Posted on 2006-10-23 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      I can relate to this, but it seems unfinished. Like what you have so far, just needs more to it.
    | Posted on 2006-09-23 00:00:00 | by spacedoutboy | [ Reply to This ]
      Im not going to check but is this the first part?its a nice beginning if it is its somethin i wish would happen for me lol........
    | Posted on 2006-09-21 00:00:00 | by every48seconds | [ Reply to This ]



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