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    dots Submission Name: Keeping secretsdots
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    Author: Ryou_Bakura
    ASL Info:    16/f/mi
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 35/43/13
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 111
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 731



    Description:
       Its a part of a poem chain about my first love. that I still love and loves me. looks for each post as it comes out and read the story of my first love.


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    dotsKeeping secretsdots
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    Trying to keep secrets,
    Divided by schools,
    Nicknames became code names,
    And we hid our life from others,
    We would meet at the middle,
    Steal money and hide,
    Out at the look out,
    Down by the water,
    We would say silly things,
    And act so close, and you would do silly things
    I think just to hear my laugh,
    Which you always got and smile at that.
    We tried to keep it a secret,
    I was scared of what people would think,
    You tried to loosen things up,
    But I was tight up about the secret life.
    Giving up in silence I always got my way,
    But I wonder what people would have thought,
    If I had told them anyway.




    Submitted on 2006-09-20 21:24:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hi, i agree very good, high poetry to me. poe
    | Posted on 2006-10-23 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      wow i realy love this its realy good... you should post more.. plz remember to come by my sight and read more of my writing.




    love you with all my heart amanda aka candy
    | Posted on 2006-09-29 00:00:00 | by allmine | [ Reply to This ]



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