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Author:	disturbedx1000
ASL Info:	21/m/ny
Elite Ratio:	3.72 - 204/316/119
Words:	251

Class/Type:	Lyrics/Fuck it all
Total Views:	206
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	1931

Description:
ok i'm not trying to be rude here but latley people private msg me telling me to search out "god" and whatnot and even in everyday life. they tell me to open my world up to jesus and "god" just becuase i'm athiest and i wear black clothes and as a guy sometimes where lines of eyeliner over my eyes and lips like the crow. this is a song i wrote for my friends band. hopefully it will shut the preachers up. agian not trying to be rude i'm just sick of being preached to. another thing, this is fare warning to those who are religous and are affended by satanic shit, turn back now, and don't read this... don't waste your time commenting on it, if your gona lecture me. better people have tried. agian i'm pissed, i just wrote it today for my friends band, and i don't mean to be rude. thank you.

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1...2...3...4...5...6...6...6.... go!

open your eyes,
be surprised,
by the visions you see...

a cross upside down beside me~

i lay on the floor,
outside heavens door,
satins trying to reel me in...

my life filled with joyest sin~

the time has come!
for one and all,
to answer his call!

*chorus*

we are satans child~
time to run wild~ (6-6-6!)

take hold!
theres nothing to think about,
open your mouth,
fucking-just scream and shout! (6-6-6!)
{X2}

*end*

prechers- hanging by his lord,
hearing- i'm so fucking bored,

smash the chaples,
burn the churches,
see inside,
all that lurches,
(X2)

pentagrams on the wall,
jesus cross,
watch him fall!

*chorus*

we are satans child~
time to run wild~ (6-6-6!)

take hold!
theres nothing to think about,
open your mouth,
fucking-just scream and shout! (6-6-6!)
{X2}

*end*

bible full of false hope!
what the fuck is a pope?!

some virgin holy man!
who the fuck gives a damn?!

let us live our lives in piece,
when we're dead-we're just diseaced!

you call me satans child~
a name weak and mild~

i am only me
so just let it be~

*chorus*

we are satans child~
time to run wild~ (6-6-6!){echo}

take hold!
theres nothing to think about,
open your mouth,
fucking-just scream and shout! (6-6-6!){echo}
{X2}

i am satans child~
my number is dialed~

6-6-6!

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||| Comments |||
  Interesting... I just made a journal thing about that earlier. I know what you mean. I hate it when people think I need to be "saved."
...But of course it's "wrong" for people to have different opinions about things (sarcasm).

Anywho, I really like this. Everything about it is wonderful and fits perfectly.
...Although pentagrams have nothing to do with Satan.

I think... if I had to pick a favorite part, it'd be:
"preachers- hanging by his lord,
hearing- I'm so [censored] bored"

It made me smile. ...I guess that's weird... But hey, what can you do?

Do you think I use ... too much? lol I think so, but it's only because I pause in random places when I speak. Some people say it's because of all the medication I take. Who knows?

Anyway, sorry for rambling.
I enjoyed this more than I've enjoyed anything else I've read in a while.

Wonderfully done
-nikkki
| Posted on 2006-10-18 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]
  Thanks for the song. I have been feeling really frustrated lately by people assuming I want to be "saved". I've been there done that. The church let me down and hipocracy is not what I am into in beliefs.
I liked this song. It is catchy and I could see HIM or someone like that singing it. I really appreciate this post. Because not everyone who is "lost" wants to be found. I will take my chances wandering.
Briannan
| Posted on 2006-09-28 00:00:00 | by Briannan | [ Reply to This ]
  Hello again...

First off...spelling mistake near the end...you wrote "piece" and it should be "peace." It's the only one I noticed...and I can't help it...

This...insanely...made sense to me. I also hate how people can start preaching about stuff like that. Personally...as long as you have found yourself [or on the way there]...that's all you need. Anyways...I love how much anger came out in this. Very obvious by your description that you were pissed...but I didn't get a good guage of how much so until near the end. In all of your stuff I've read...I've picked up on the emotion comming out in your writting. And that's amazing.

Okay...so...I seriously never read lyrics....like, never. I think it would be interesting to see if you could convert this more into I guess 'normal' [mind the term] poetry rather than prose...I think you could take the emotions and your descriptions that much further if you weren't limited as much in the lyrical style. Other than that...this was amazing.

**** [imagine them as stars] for you...and a favs add as well...

Jess
| Posted on 2006-09-23 00:00:00 | by shmuzzelle | [ Reply to This ]
  Ok.. for starters, WOW! I loved it man! Bad ass! Well, now that I got that off my chest lol... I have nothing bad to say about it and like nikita2u said, I would love to hear it with music. It would make for a bad ass head banging song with the right music behind those words. If you would.... send me a copy when they make it. If not, that's fine too just would love to hear it. Anyway, great job. Should hollar at me sometime, I happen to be into a lot of that...
yahoo messenger id evlgothchick666 hope to hear from you.
Holy xx
| Posted on 2006-09-22 00:00:00 | by Holy Wood | [ Reply to This ]
  okies feed back......

One read the description sorry about that btw was the person who PM you named ronswords by any chance? wouldnt suprise me if so.
Second i never and i mean NEVER read lyrics i just dont whats so ever cause i can never really umm give uh feedback?

anywho better feel special because im ganna do so for you. Strangly i love this actually i would love t hear it with the music hell these are awesome or maybe i should say kickass lyrics.

and im ganna get over myself and start to read more lyrics but hell im also ganna check out some of your work if i like this so much wounder how your other writtings are O.o anyway im adding this to my fav. this is such a strange ass day for me. oh well damn stupid ADD!! im sorry for digressing on your work.

your words are really descriptive i love how i can actually see all the things you are saying...wow never felt so lame in my life. (im reading what i wrote and i feel pathetic because i cannot give the feedback this deserves BUT IM TRYING GEESH!)

well i have like less than five mins. in class so im ganna let you go and check your work out when i get home

all the love
nikki

*kisses*
| Posted on 2006-09-21 00:00:00 | by nikita2u | [ Reply to This ]

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