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    dots Submission Name: fought too long?dots
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    Author: ibelikeso
    ASL Info:    27/M/FL
    Elite Ratio:    4.99 - 119/106/24
    Words: 287
    Class/Type: Misc/Venting
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       why try so hard in this life? im tired of it... just venting...


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    dotsfought too long?dots
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    how do u know you've fought too long?


    when the struggles come and take eveyrthing away...
    yet you dont look for the better days.
    thats when know you've fought too long.

    you continue to fight long and hard...
    even when theres noone there.
    thats when you've fought too long.

    when there is no more joy in what u do...
    except trying to get over the next one.
    but thats no joy, its just what u do...
    because you've fought too long.

    can you make it??? it keeps getting bigger and harder, yet you continue to fight.
    what once was wishes of fun and laughter become meer annoyance, obstacles to win this fight. yeah you know... you've fought too long.

    and you continue to fight this life
    and the world
    and the people
    and everything else that rises against you.
    when theres no opponent yet ur still punching.
    thats when you've fought too long

    scare to stop because you dont want to be knocked down again... yeah you know, you've fought too long.
    no more love, no more passion, just the shadow of a huge man with a hard heart...
    noone can knock you down anymore... you've fought too long!

    but at what cost?
    noone is near you
    you've fought too long
    you've fought too hard
    you've fought too fast

    pushed everything and everyone away. fought too hard to realize you already had your prize...
    you've already won...!
    but... why do you continue to fight?

    i know... its because you've fought too long.


    i also know because i too...

    have fought too long.




    Submitted on 2006-09-20 22:29:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i liked it ....and i wish i could stop my own fight
    | Posted on 2006-11-03 00:00:00 | by CFHillyard | [ Reply to This ]


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