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    dots Submission Name: tallulah (sonata arctica)dots
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    Author: myonlysalvation
    Elite Ratio:    2.11 - 41/48/42
    Words: 262
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Passion
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       do you like these lyrics??? i think they are deep.
    .not mine.


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    dotstallulah (sonata arctica)dots
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    Remember when we used to look
    at sunsets far away
    And how you said "this is never over"

    I believed your every word
    and I guess you did too
    But now youīre saying
    " hey lets think this over"




    You take my hand and pull me next to you,
    so close to you
    I have a feeling you donīt have the words.
    I found one for you, kiss your cheek,
    say bye,
    and walk away
    Donīt look back cause
    I am crying .......

    I remember little things,

    you hardly ever do
    Tell me why.
    I donīt know why itīs over
    I remember shooting stars,
    the walk we took that night

    I hope your wish came true,
    mine betrayed me

    You let my hand go,
    and you fake a smile for me

    I have a feeling you donīt know what to do
    I look deep in your eyes,

    you hesitate a while...

    Why are you crying?

    Tallulah,
    Itīs easier to live alone
    than fear the time itīs over
    Tallulah,
    find the words and talk to me
    Tallulah,
    This could be... heaven




    This could be...





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