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    dots Submission Name: A Letter To My Frienddots
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    Author: kession
    ASL Info:    18~M~ok
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 115/156/63
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
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       this is just a note that i wrote to my friend when i found out that she was moving away.


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    dotsA Letter To My Frienddots
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    "Whenever it rains, it reminds me of you. Although 2000 miles away is so far I still always walk outside in the rain and kiss it just for you. It never fails me. The rain will always come and I'll always love you. So the next time you see a storm on the horizon please don't fear, it's just heaven doing me a favor of taking you my kiss. Just walk outside and kiss the rain whenever you need me.

    Raquel,

    this will probably be the last note I write you and the last time I will hear from you. you will probably get to oregon and forget all about me. I just want you to know that I will always care about you even if you never feel the same way. and remember, no matter what, I will always be here for you.


    Love,
    Billy




    Submitted on 2006-09-21 22:59:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is really sweet and emotional.
    Its very powerful and deep. I Loved it :]
    I'm sure she won't forget a sweet friend like you :]
    It made me feel longing and like i needed a friend! i need a hug! lol
    this is a very sweet piece :]

    Nice write :]
    | Posted on 2008-01-02 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]
      awww this is too cute even though its a letter i think its one of the best things you've written....good job.......
    | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by lah | [ Reply to This ]
      how sweet of you. i think we could all use a friend like you.
    i doubt she'll forget you, we never forget the friends with hearts of gold.
    nice write.
    whirl**
    | Posted on 2006-09-22 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]


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