yeah, i like the message -- you did lose half yourself in the thing but you gained a new perspective or something. i dunno. this seemed to have some hidden messages in there. i liked it. i read it a few times. at the end i don't think you were talking about losing your half at all. or the fact that the dude was somewhat materialistic. or the fact that none of material things you halved would ever compensate for the half of your heart that he took away or something. there was more to it than just the mere break up -- at least that's what i felt. but i guess every reader gives the writer's (or someone in the field of artistic expression) work a different life. in the process making it something that's very personal to the reader. this was something to think bout. good stuff. very good stuff.
This was a sad story but kind of cute. I got a laugh out of the part by cutting everything in half. Your description was very well put in this piece, almost to the point making me want to go cut something in half. A very creative picture you painted with words. I hope “she” (the one the story Is about) was able to move on. Good job with this piece, I enjoyed the read. Good luck with all your writing