Description: This is a typical Amy write, but I haven't submitted anything lately.
Some Kind of Mojo -------------------------------------------
she sneezed and words went everywhere
a piece of prose hung from her nose
a metaphor was atop her big toe
somehow they'd freed themselves
from that prison of a page
they amused her
by changing color
by rearranging themselves
she gleefully exclaimed, "this is some kind of mojo,
but aren't all words magic?"
This was very neat. I loved how you ended it. Perfect! It was short, but it was not a simple or weak poem due to it's lenght. Ths was funny and very creative in style and wording. good imagery and a pure hearted message all writer's can relate to. Great work Amy!
Delightful poem. It has a free and innocent feel to it - just the right amount of humor and enough information to complete the picture in your mind.
I'm one of these people that get affected by the moon and mostly my 'word mojo' seems to go awry and I say the weirdest things or just give up on a thought and finish the sentence trailing off lamely...
I'll never be able to sneeze now without wondering about the prose :-)
This is really cute and has your signature cleverness in every line. I don't think I would change a thing. I didn't know your mojo could let go but with sneeze I suppose anything is possible.
It sure clears my head out. Now, maybe the writes will flow for you.
AWWW This is so adorable! You are right this is a typical Amy write. :) I love this nonetheless! I think I've told you this before but I think you should illustrate your poems. Sort of like that one guy does...I forgot his name..haha I don't feel like looking it up right now either. I love this though! Prose hanging from her nose and metaphors atop her toe...that's amazing imagery. :) Great job! I wish I had something productive to say but I really really really enjoyed this. It's a favorite! Hugs and love sis! :) Bethany
Been wondering around. Thought i'd say hi and see what's new.
Some kind of mojo. what an interesting title to pick. And you've also made an interesting point. It's so hard to argue with that especially if everything is placed the way it is suppose to be placed.
I think this is the part where poetry is known to be fun. You just brought fun into this poem and that also is very hard to argue with.
So once more, this piece has all the fun it needs to say that it was very enjoyable to read.
this is so funny and quirky, Amy! i love "a piece of prose hung from her nose.." and the metaphor on her big toe.. wonderful use of visuals and language. and magic! you've proven your point, words are magic, and "some kind of mojo." i see her dancing and giggling..
Submission Name: Some Kind of Mojo
