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    Author: trapt
    ASL Info:    17/f/az
    Elite Ratio:    2.31 - 21/32/26
    Words: 321
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
    Total Views: 111
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       me and my bf have almost been dating a yr on Oct. 5, 06 tonight after i seen him and i started thinking about our talk we had and talks weve had in the past and how everything feels i realized that ive finaly found that one person that doesnt want to hurt me that wants me like i do them and loves me for me and for me its an amazing feeling to have so much trust in someone finaly that i never have had with another and its all so real and i love him 4 showing me and giving me what i thought i couldnt have.. he truely loves me


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    i look in ur eyes and what used to be a crush is now love.

    somewhere along the line i fell in love.
    between the long talks on the phone,
    poking fun at one another,trying to look
    my best,laughing,and being seriouse,

    my feelings grew and now when i look
    at u i see a future and i see trust.

    this feeling u give me takes my breath away
    and leaves me completely speachless.

    even now those words im searching for
    just dont seem good enough.

    its u and me; withought u where would i be?
    ive become so much because of u and ive learned a lot.

    u continue to fill my heart every day. 3 lil words u say remind me that im urs and im here to stay.

    i can honestly say u have become my first thought when i wake up and my last when i close my eyes.

    i love u for u and everything u do i know that
    no matter what ull always have a place in my
    heart,because ill love u today,tomorrow,and forever.

    if im dreaming please i beg u to leave me sleeping i dont think ive ever felt so complete and happy; i need u.

    as i write these words tears begin to swell up in my eyes. thats how i know i truely do love u;my heart can feel it.

    i want nothing more then u. i hope more than anything u know that i love u with all my heart. u r truly my best friend,the one i love, and my boyfriend.

    i love u baby and no matter what ill make sure u know even to our very end because thats just one more thing that i can do to prove that this love is true.






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    ||| Comments |||
      I like it a lot.. I hope that this happens to me again one of these days...
    lizzie
    | Posted on 2006-09-25 00:00:00 | by angeldust | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked it alot too...if I had it, it would be my poem of feeling.
    _Tina A.K.A. Gothic Misery
    | Posted on 2006-09-24 00:00:00 | by Gothic Misery | [ Reply to This ]
      to find a love like this is a dream come true. i'd hold on to it if i were you.
    you have put this under the catagory random thoughts. i think you could make a beautiful poem from this by just putting it into stanza's, giving it structure.
    out of the whole piece, one line struck me ~

    'I want nothing more then u'

    so simple, yet says it all.

    great write,
    whirl**
    | Posted on 2006-09-23 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]



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