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    dots Submission Name: Coffee For My Ladydots
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    Author: queenhenry
    ASL Info:    18/F/singapore
    Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 9/8/14
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsCoffee For My Ladydots
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    a bitter, thick, black,
    dark and strong snack
    that slides down your throat,
    ever so slow, on your tongue it floats

    the taste will linger;
    the smell overpowers.

    where's the sugar, you inquire
    depleted, and i forgot to get more;
    where's the creamer, you inquire
    what does black coffee need creamer for?

    my mistress, inside your cynical head,
    black and bitter will be all your beverage.
    peer down its shiny surface
    and examine your wounded face
    with all due respect, ma'am, let fall your tears
    if bitter don't suit you, salty might be better.




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