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    dots Submission Name: WALK YOUR DREAMdots

    Author: SIVA
    ASL Info:    23/Male/Dubai
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 220
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 518
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       A Poem from the bottom of my heart.

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    dotsWALK YOUR DREAMdots

    I travelled through the only road
    and kept on moving at boring speed
    It turned left and at times right
    trees and plants filled my sight

    I kept walking slow and fast
    Sun and moon were found and lost
    Life was stable so it seemed
    Change nonesoever was ever deemed

    The Road got narrow as it grew
    Alas! it did split into two
    I was confused I was lost
    "This or that which is right?"

    I stood there with my eyes wide
    None to help me on the side
    I tried to see into the road
    No clue as to whats aboard

    I did nothing but to weep
    till i managed to fall asleep
    Why did He make me walk all the way?
    Only to lead me into the sway

    I was disturbed by a dream
    filled with white like a cream
    I could hear some voice aloud
    The one on my right was the road

    I woke up suddenly in the night
    kept on staring to my right
    There is the path there is the way
    I started walking right away

    Morning came and sun was bright
    I was glad to see the light
    A smell of hope and full of Green
    Never forget to walk your dream

    Submitted on 2006-09-22 05:40:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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