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    dots Submission Name: exhaust medots
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    Author: ladiesplanet1
    ASL Info:    23.cali baby
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 720/463/165
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsexhaust medots
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    here i go
    once again
    thinking dirty thoughts
    getting drunk
    on lust after
    doing these body shots
    lock me up
    make me you pet
    tell me what i should do
    make me cream
    and i will do
    all that i can for you
    pornograph
    i cant watch that
    you know it makes me hot
    what we've done
    is between us
    and i have not forgot
    it feels good
    you inside me
    my body is torn to pieces
    have you seen me
    when i come
    the juices my body releases
    so be nice
    i need your touch
    i want to feel you deep
    exhaust me
    until i dream
    fuck me until i sleep




    Submitted on 2006-09-22 12:43:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You notty girl! Keep it cumming and don't ever stop.
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2006-09-25 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]


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