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    dots Submission Name: I Am Musicdots
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    Author: LadyChaos
    ASL Info:    19/F/DE
    Elite Ratio:    3.42 - 718/606/95
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 1484
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1062



    Description:
       I had an epiphany


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    dotsI Am Musicdots
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    I am music.
    Listen to me,
    I am everywhere and nowhere
    I am everything and nothing
    Filling a room, yet it's still empty
    Listen to me
    My message swelling in dramatic crescendos
    Even if you cannot understand
    It is still there
    Beneath the beating of the drums
    Dynamic and alive
    Beckoning your soul to dance



    Emotions transcending into sound
    And sound back to emotion
    I whisper to you
    Tickling your subconscious
    Awakening thoughts long since sedated
    I fill you up
    Mingling with your soul
    Righting your wrongs
    Soothing the pangs
    And changing the rhythm of your heart

    Can you feel me?
    I caress you like a lover
    You cannot resist my kiss,
    But why would you want to?
    I am the elixer of life.
    Drink long
    Drink deep
    And you can glimpse everlasting life
    It is there
    Inside me
    For I
    Am
    Music.




    Submitted on 2004-05-23 19:34:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Great way to explain music cause it does the same to me.. Without music and rythm i wouldnt b me. It does everything for me music was there the first time i feel in love and it will remain all around always in the room always filling it up whilst i think of the different things that happened throughout my life maybe you should have pointed out some of those thoughts it is a good write though almsot makes me see the music flowing through once a poem can paint a picture its perfect so this is a well written piece i love reading all your poems so keep the good work up
    | Posted on 2005-09-14 00:00:00 | by wallya20 | [ Reply to This ]
      this poem just captures so much i cant even begin to explain what i mean but i dont have to because you have explained it, music, so in depthly in this.
    | Posted on 2004-07-22 00:00:00 | by locke | [ Reply to This ]
      this is great!

    "Emotions transcending into sound
    And sound back to emotion"

    i love this image. this is the ultimate description of the exchange that happens when something is turned into music and then is received, felt and interpreted.

    excellent. a favorite.
    | Posted on 2004-07-05 00:00:00 | by jdinning67 | [ Reply to This ]
      "elixer" should be "elixir", i think.

    i can hear this being read confidently in an outdoor auditorium where the words echo back and forth between the speaker and the listener and more than the sound is felt on the tiny hairs of my skin. you call it an epiphany, but it's more of a miracle to read so freshly something that has settled into every true poet's soul; the intimate knowledge of that which can never be seen or touched, but just felt, and something you can't really describe, although you come extremely close. thank you for sharing this - it was better than the coffee i still haven't had to wake me up happy.

    ~Blue
    | Posted on 2004-06-24 00:00:00 | by blueorchids | [ Reply to This ]
      very well written ...to say it was magnificent would probably gbored u as uv heard the words all day..i really think ure poem has a good amount of oxymorons...

    welcomingdepature ;)
    -lolavie
    | Posted on 2004-05-25 00:00:00 | by lolavie | [ Reply to This ]
      Awesome! Absolutly loved it! It had passion and deep feeling! This is so good, you did a really good job on everything! There is nothing that i would ever change on it! Awesome, Awesome write!
    | Posted on 2004-05-24 00:00:00 | by Broken heart dies | [ Reply to This ]
      Ya I like it. My only (small) complaint is that you implicitly generalize all music - which necessitates discounting the effects and characterizations of other types (never heard purposefully emotionless music?). Just the same, its a small complaint and I really like this poem....fav
    shard
    | Posted on 2004-05-23 00:00:00 | by particularshard | [ Reply to This ]
      interesting topic. Wonderful words, you make it seem so, i dunno, just like the words are coming from every direction. I'm glad you made this a bit lenghtier too. A great pice to read.
    | Posted on 2004-05-23 00:00:00 | by roxygirl239 | [ Reply to This ]


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