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    dots Submission Name: *Rambles And Symbolsdots
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    Author: Caotic_Disaster
    ASL Info:    16/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 447/349/148
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 850
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 362



    Description:
       i wrote this for an essay i had to do about poetry....i dont really like the title so if u have any suggestions let me know.thanx


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    dots*Rambles And Symbolsdots
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    Words on a page,
    Symbols on a screen,
    Scribbles in some kind of format.
    What is it we mean,
    When we write these things,
    In hand or a funky font?
    Trying to make sense.
    To get across what we want.
    Rambles of ideas,
    One big mess.
    This is what one would call a poem,
    In no way meaningless.




    Submitted on 2006-09-22 15:05:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I think the placement of words could make this clearer, but most of the rhymes were well managed.

    - 'What is it we mean,' - - - - -> 'What is it that we me,' ???????

    - Last 2 rhymes didn't really rhyme well

    - A good attempt on describing what poetry really is


    Enjoyed reading this well-said write.



    Abbas
    | Posted on 2006-09-24 00:00:00 | by abuzzbuzz92 | [ Reply to This ]
      Why not call it Rambles and Symbols? Something like that. Perceptive poem I liked it.
    | Posted on 2006-09-22 00:00:00 | by siradrian | [ Reply to This ]


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