[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: Sweet Sophiadots

    Author: Twice
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 71/82/52
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 579
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 595


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsSweet Sophiadots

    Silent I stand above you
    And watch your gental breath
    I promise to protect you
    From the cold hands of death
    I'll always be below
    to catch you when you fall
    pick you up and tell you
    it's alright and to stand tall
    to kiss your wounds when your hurt
    Dry your crying eyes
    Share your fondest moments
    To smell the summer skies
    I guess what I'm trying to tell you
    Is my baby please sleep tight
    I'll be here in the morning
    And for the rest of your life.

    Submitted on 2006-09-22 23:00:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      This is a great poem for a lover & a friend.
    I like the your form & diction in this piece.
    If I had someone in my life, I would give them this poem. So I hope Sophia is a real person.

    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2006-09-23 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]
      very cute. i'm assuming 'sweet sophia' is your daughter?
    it has the perfect rhythm and length to be a lullaby. could be remembered easily.
    great job.
    | Posted on 2006-09-23 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]
      this sounds like something my mother would say to me. i relly like it because it reminds me of wen i was younger and my mum used to tuck me into bed. def going to add this to my favs. <33ashley
    | Posted on 2006-09-23 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]