leaving in broken heart ache and tears we severed all ties accomplished over the years
subdued by the silence through loud triumph and pain
know matter how the sun shines, still cold it remains
the air filled once with laughter and joy
turns that to the expression of a little lost boy
confusion and lonliness shining though eyes for all to see
we forget to withdraw that this boy is you and me
we are just like him scared out of our minds
contemplating over and over whether we deserve this life
questions open ended still linger to be true
for this feeling i conceive of is ironic for you?
for you dont take it straight, deep to the heart
we wake up a new day to the same old start
It's good to know that some people admit all this. I enjoyed reading this for its simplicity but again, the way you presented this could be improved. Believe me: you'll get a lot more comments if you improve that.