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    dots Submission Name: need tyour opinion.... help a gal out pleasedots
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    Author: naynay9_90
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    dotsneed tyour opinion.... help a gal out pleasedots
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    so everyone forget my birthday and i was a little upset, no one came to see me they remembered two days later however yay! meh!
    the worst thing was i didnt get to see my best friend cos he moved a while ago, he was suppose to come down for a holiday and see me and some friends but that didnt happen so now i have to wait to januray and wrost of all i told the person i love!!!!!!! last night that i seriously seiously love them and wanted to kiss them and yea but they have a partner i just no i can treat them better!

    wat do you's guys think.. do you tell the person you love, that you love them or bottle it up with chance of combustion?




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