Heyyy, I remember this. It's one of the best things I've ever read. And you know, I still think of it from time to time while I slowly inhale the road to cancer... which is disgusting, but I don't really mind.
Anyway, I'm not going to repeat everything I already said in my last comment. I just staggered upon this and figured I'd mention how much I still love it.
I couldn't agree more... and you said it perfectly. The wording and everything is wonderful.
For some reason, the line "soon you'll be digging in the transplant bin" stuck out the most for me. I've never heard that before. You're very creative.
I can give ya nothing but compliments. It's nice to finally read something great on this site again. Lately it's been mostly "Hi, I'm angsty and I hate my life." (I know some people like that, but it's just not for me.) You know?
I'm a smoker, unfortunately, and I agree a 100% with what ur saying here. Wish I had pink lungs so I could laugh, but do keep in mind that smoking is addidictive, but not impossible to stop, I'm trying right now. Love this piece, I think it'll help in my ciggarette rehab. thanks