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    dots Submission Name: Goodbye father...........dots

    Author: naynay9_90
    Elite Ratio:    1.41 - 13/2/10
    Words: 204
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       my song but i changed into poem yeah.... i altered my song

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    dotsGoodbye father...........dots

    its hard to tell you how i feel
    when the fact is i dont know
    the pit inside my gut, gruadual anger builds its growth
    i often ask myself why?
    why is it that you dont care
    why are you still here
    and why am i still alive
    cos i cant breathe its getting deeper everyday
    and the pain wont go away
    disguising disbeliefs as i cut my last vein
    and as the blood begins to dry im reminded of the pain
    the past that rears its head at me
    this self inflicted pain
    you often ask what happened to the girl, the girl that you once knew?
    your little girl of innocents, innocents and truth
    well say goodbye to her cos she aint coming back, started when you fucked up dad now our lifes spiralled of track
    but the blood doesnt dry anymore
    it continues to bleed non stop father
    now you have nothing to stop you from getting to her
    isnt that how youd rather it to be
    well guess what daddy
    tears dont fall no more, you may have persuaded me then, but now ive shut the door and im taking back my mum.

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