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    dots Submission Name: Half Moon Harmonydots
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    Author: ConScribe
    ASL Info:    19/M/Tucson,AZ
    Elite Ratio:    5.11 - 262/360/143
    Words: 283
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 982
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1783



    Description:
       I still have a few ideas I need to add to this, but I thought I'd post what I have.


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    dotsHalf Moon Harmonydots
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    Half of the moon might be hidden,
    But it still exists as part of a whole,
    A coin with craters
    Perpetually placed into the prayphone
    Of the night sky, vague and vast,
    Sufficient space for the dreamers to wander,
    Sending their spirits skyward,
    As if every star were a telephone pole,
    Constellations connecting wishes
    To be played on Godís answering machine.

    There is no past or future,
    Only an ethereal confinement to the present state
    With our self sown senses fabricating time
    As a means of recalling
    And relating ourselves to the
    Physical changes we witness
    In the world around us.
    The phases of the moon are an illusion,
    A path through the uniform fabric of energy,
    Apart from the cycle of time.


    Remember, the moon only acts as a mirror,
    Reflecting a secondhand image
    Of the sunís pure potential,
    Which, in turn, projects its face
    On a peaceful pond, forming a reflection of a reflection
    As we skip mind stones over the surface
    Of a watered down reality,
    Till our stones lose their momentum
    And slip beneath perceptionís rippled veneer,
    Only to have our inner forms float upwards
    Once death has separated the body from the spirit,
    And the weight on our metaphysical shoulders is lifted,
    Allowing us to raise our heads to the heavenís high and absorb
    The enlightened dawn of another step towards infinity.

    The rays of our lives emanate
    From a raging ball of fire,
    Burning with the cycle,
    Round and round in a revolution,
    That can only end where it began.




    Submitted on 2006-09-24 12:20:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Yes, this is as it is. And put so beautifully. You share my thoughts.

    The enlightened dawn of another step towards infinity

    made my decision: This is a favourite.
    | Posted on 2006-09-24 00:00:00 | by -YonY- | [ Reply to This ]
      This is pretty good. I liked

    "There is no past or future,
    Only an ethereal confinement to the present state"

    Seems pretty obvious that this is in free verse, and I do liek the last lines... but I would consider having at least a rhyming couplet at the end. I thought the comparison of stars to telephone poles was really good too.
    | Posted on 2006-09-24 00:00:00 | by AtrophyEmpathos | [ Reply to This ]


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