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    dots Submission Name: HATEdots
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    Author: Cutting Envy
    ASL Info:    900/?/Mars
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 116/160/53
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 260
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1005



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       I hope to open some eyes with this one, can you dig it


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    dotsHATEdots
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    Hate is so common these days.
    People hate people in so many ways.

    We hate because of someone's outlook.
    We hate because of someone's color.
    We hate because of someone's voice.
    We hate because we're hated by others.

    We kill our strong and rape our own.
    We spill our blood for reasons unknown.
    We murder each other for wars of turf,
    And we make sure our hatred is shown.

    The knife so sharp it banished my sight,
    By someone whos hated because he was right.
    The hate so strong it clouds my head,
    'Cause some end up hated and some end up dead.

    The future starts now, the past can't live on.
    We remember the fights from those who are gone.
    Dead to the world because they hated hate,
    And dying for peace was their willing fate.

    Don't let their stuggles die in the wind,
    Carry this out, beggining to end.




    Submitted on 2004-05-23 22:51:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You have a very steady and mature voice here. I think the topic has been covered, but you're right, if it reaches one person, it's worth it. I liked "We hate because we're hated by others."
    I think somethign interesting, as shown by "And we make sure our hatred is shown." is that people can't hate silently, they feel the need to show it in whatever way worst. Think about hwat the worst would be like with explosive acts of love like that.

    ~ Niphredil
    | Posted on 2004-05-24 00:00:00 | by Niphredil | [ Reply to This ]
      i liked it. i really dont know what to say other then that, it flowed well to read out loud. i think its a nice poem
    | Posted on 2004-05-23 00:00:00 | by sinjen | [ Reply to This ]



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