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    dots Submission Name: It doesn't have to Rhyme.dots
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    Author: BahamutZer0
    ASL Info:    22 / Male / Wi, USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.76 - 14/17/9
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Some of those things, in that sky...
    I'll tell you.

    They don't just pass by.
    But that's another time when I...realize.

    In the car, or the train, to Chicago...

    On the shuttle to the moon.

    Always is there that spot or dimension or moment where you will be enlightened.

    Enlightened.

    To the point of poetry....poetry is always....
    Never ending.

    It doesn't have to rhyme, or be of perfection for the perfectionists.

    Walk the other way, if you think so.
    Walk the other way.




    Submitted on 2004-05-23 22:53:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I actually got this, despite the late hour and my feeble mind. ;) Or at least a piece of it. This is the epitome of the phrase, "train of thought".
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    "Enlightened.

    To the point of poetry....poetry is always....
    Never ending."

    I love all those images, that enlightenment begets poetry, and poetry will never end. Good stuff. This is almsot like flaoting in a large pool with your eyes shut and the sun beating down on your face, and all of a sudden...there's this whisper in your mind...

    ~ Niphredil
    | Posted on 2004-05-24 00:00:00 | by Niphredil | [ Reply to This ]



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