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    dots Submission Name: Prayerdots
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    Author: BigRed
    ASL Info:    20/M/NJ
    Elite Ratio:    3.05 - 49/52/37
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 134
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 563



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    dotsPrayerdots
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    He starts,
    "Dear Lord I thank you".
    He ends,
    With a simple "Amen".
    Between were words so powerful,
    To a power beyond all men.

    He asks for his sister's protection,
    And a way to help the other two.
    His father's safety on his ways to work.
    And for his mother to visit someone,
    Before their time is through.

    He said nothing for himself,
    For that he doesn't care.
    He felt he needed nothing,
    When he told God his prayer.




    Submitted on 2006-09-24 15:18:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I hafta agree wit jen, this is a very cute piece. It shows the happiness and contentment one can feel through mere prayer. It's refreshing.
    | Posted on 2006-09-24 00:00:00 | by black_beauty18 | [ Reply to This ]
      this one is really cute (for lack of a better word, sorry im not in the best of moods lately), i think i like it better cuz i can see how it relates to your life and everything. your rhyme isnt forced oranything either.... i like it, good job
    | Posted on 2006-09-24 00:00:00 | by jen531 | [ Reply to This ]



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